Just relax with this!

Whenever I chant these words, a lot of memorable things recall me to the day before. Since I first listened to this song performed by Cat Phuong. In the corner of my eyes- as a 10- year boy, is the image of Southern cottages surrounded by the tortuous green river. Here and there are the foot bridges and the canoes slightly floating under the shade of a coconut tree which has become the symbol of this wealthy land. What a peaceful heaven today I still desire. By k_k

I like yours –it says what you mean it to say and it gives me a picture – exactly as you intend.

I would pen it as below but it gives the same picture – just shows that it is what each of us see

Whenever I chant these words it re-awakens my memory to the first time that I listened to this song performed by Cat Phoung. I was a ten year old boy and through my eyes I pictured sleepy Southern cottages surrounded by a tortuous green river. I could see occasional rustic foot bridges and canoes gently floating under the shade of coconut trees, the symbol of this rich land. An idyllic peaceful heaven which would be my perfect dream for evermore.


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